Gifted: #WriteTribeFestivalOfWordsJune2018 #WriteBravely
GIFTED
Rob and the woods had an inexplicable connection. He found his inner peace amidst the deep, dark woods. And walking through them at dusk gave him more pleasure than a Zinger burger would give a youth his age.
That particular evening as Rob walked past the huge oak tree, he heard a soft wailing sound. Rob thought it did not sound like an animal. He stopped short and turned back. As his feet trampled the dry leaves, the wailing got louder.
Under the pile of leaves and innumerable acorns, lay a little cherub; barely clothed, wrapped in a soft muslin cloth.
As Rob gently lifted her in his arms, she stopped wailing and started cooing gently, reassured by the warmth of his snug embrace.
Rob’s wildest dreams had come true. He had always wanted to be a young father, and his destiny was sealed that summer evening, for he was the chosen one.
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This post is written for Day 1 of Write Tribe Festival of Words June 2018. Today’s theme is the above photo prompt.
25 thoughts on “Gifted: #WriteTribeFestivalOfWordsJune2018 #WriteBravely”
Aww… this is such a beautiful post Nats. Just the one I wanted to read on such gloomy dull noon. You got my spirits going for another session of reading and sharing 😉
Here is mine – https://www.gleefulblogger.com/2018/06/25/annabelle-fiction-gleefulblogger/
I’m so glad Dips. So good to see you here. Been eons❣️❣️ Hopping across to read yours
How beautifully you have evoked the feeling of safety the baby experienced and the protective emotions within the young man.
Thanks so much Kalpana. 🙂 heading to read your posts too.
What a wonderful gift! To have a ready made baby with none of the pre-natal trauma, a wife to deal with etc etc. But how long with our friend be happy with his ‘gift’?
I always wonder how one can describe the essence in just few words. You nailed it. Can feel the warmth of this post. I wish there could be many such people like Rob.
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How beautiful. Infants do respond to the warmth of human touch.
The title of this post aptly holds good for both Rob and the baby girl. I liked how you used the prompt to create a short, crisp and effective tale. This works best for readers like me.
Beautiful story. Loved the way you created a setting without using too many words – its a gift! I would love to know what happened next with Rob…hoping you write about it…
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Lovely read 🙂
Thank you so much Vartika. 🙂
crisp and heartwarming. Loved it.
Thank you dear Tina. <3
Nice one Natasha! Loved the conclusion – he was the chosen one!
Oh thanks so much Anshu. Yes, I’m so happy for he was indeed the chosen one, and his precious gift. 🙂
That’s a good one. While everyone writes about the love of mother to a child , it’s good to read about young man’s love to be a father.
Thanks Mahathi, yes, I did want to give it a different twist. I’m so happy you could relate to it. Thank you. 🙂
Touching. And that’s not just a word. You have explained the travesty of numerous girl babies in such beautiful words. But everyone isn’t as lucky.
Yeah true, she was the gifted one, as much as he was. Thank you dear Anupriya for reading. 🙂
Thats such a lovely and heartwarming gift from God
Thanks dear Aks. <3
lovely story di…
I’m glad you liked it sweetheart. <3
Such a heartwarming and beautiful story Natasha. Loved reading it.
Thank you for reading dear Sonia. Good to see you here. Hopping across to read yours. Thank you. 🙂