Ivanka’s Land: #Fiction #FFAW
Ivanka’s Land
The bus trundles down the countryside, as the mist cloaks itself against the picket fences, partially blurring the view of the ruins and that one odd cottage that stands graciously, in the middle of nowhere.
“Stop, please. I need to get off here,” hollers Ivanka from her bus seat.
“Here?” says the bus driver bringing the bus to a screeching halt.
“You got to be kidding me, Señorita. That’s an abandoned land. Nobody dares go there. Ghouls and banshees roam around freely, preying on human blood,” he says with a morbid expression.
Ivanka lets out a raucous laugh.
“Please, don’t give me that gob-shit. That land belongs to my fore-fathers and I’m the current heir. I’m here to reclaim my rights.”
“I beg you not to. You won’t return alive,” pitches in an old gentleman with a receding hairline.
Ivanka’s bloodshot eyes bore through his heart, as a blazing flame reduces him to ashes. The bus crashes into the picket fence, bursting into a lethal conflagration.
Ivanka let’s out a sinister, ghoulish laugh!
Photo Credit: Jodi McKinney
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Total Word Count: 174
Linking this post to Priceless Joy’s, Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. The challenge is to write a flash fiction story or poem in around 100 – 175 words, based on the weekly photo prompt. Thank you Priceless Joy, for this lovely prompt. For more information visit here.
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36 thoughts on “Ivanka’s Land: #Fiction #FFAW”
Turns out the ghost that they thought was lurking outside was actually in the bus.
Yeah, unfortunately so! Thank you Bernadette, for swinging by. 🙂
Yikes! I was sort of expecting that ending. Sinister stuff.
Ouch! Was it her sinister look in the photo ?
well I certainly wasn’t expecting that, great story 🙂
Thanks Kate. I’m glad it took you by surprise, though I hope it did not scare you too much! Apologies if it did.
Woaaahhh, what a twist! Loved the buildup!
Thanks Soumya, for reading and leaving your imprints. <3
You make it very difficult for people to post comments on your blog. This story is great! She was one of the ghouls! LOL! I enjoyed this story!
Hi PJ, why was it difficult to post a comment, may I ask? What was the issue. Do let me know, how I can help.
Glad you enjoyed the story.
Oh gosh!!! Why, oh why, do I end up reading such stories are night!! 😛 I was so looking forward to what happens next after reading the first line, Natz!
Ha! Ha! Shilpa. Sorry! Promise you my next story isn’t a scary one, so do read it when you can. 🙂
Ohhhh!! That was creepy and scary! You got the mood just right Nats! Looking forward to more of your fiction.
Yes, back to writing fiction after a hiatus. Enjoy the process totally. Wrote one today too. Thanks for reading and sharing your views dear Kala. <3
ivanka is powerful. Why is she riding a bus? She could have taken a cab using her power. Nice ghost story.
She is riding a bus so that she can wreck havoc and cause more destruction and fear. Thanks for reading Abhijit.
woa!!! loved this story and your gripping narration 😀
Thank you dear Raj. <3
I’m going on a bus today – I hope Ivanka isn’t one of my fellow passengers! Great take Natasha.
Ha! Ha! Keith, I pray not. Thank you, so much.
Ooooh, he took ghalat ghoul se panga!
Haan kuch aisa he samjhey :))))
Omg, the poor bus driver!
I know, and for no fault of his. Thanks D for the comment.
Muahahahah… well not where I thought this was going when I saw the name, but ghouls will be ghouls.
Nicely done.
Thanks dear Holly for visiting. Good to see you here. 🙂
Scary story though I must admit the photo didn’t inspire fear or terror in me . In the contrary , it seemed strangely calm and mystical.
That was the idea, Sunita. Since it was the featured photo that appears at the top of the story and if I had put up a scary one, it would have given away the story. Right? 🙂
Scary :-() So, A ghost claiming her land. Good take on the prompt.
Ha! Ha! Yes, so to speak! 🙂 Thank you for stopping by. 🙂
This was a super intelligent take on the prompt. You must write flash fiction more often. Your writing is really rich in language and narrative.
Thanks so much Sonia. I love writing fiction. Got to be more regular. Just been on a writing hiatus off late. Thank you for the encouraging words. 🙂
Wow! What a wonderful take on the prompt! Loved how you used the prompt for a horror story!
Thanks Reema, I’m so glad you liked my take on the prompt. So good to see you swing by. 🙂
haha… a nice take on that prompt 🙂
I would have been thinking of horror within the house seeing the prompt… you didn’t even let us reach the house 😀
Thank you Doc, so glad to see your comment.:)