The Unannounced Guest: #WriteTribeProblogger #WriteBravely #FridayFictioneers
“We found him on the porch. It’s broken a wing,” said the DH, almost thrusting a Mynah on my face.
The nine-year-old piped in, “Mamma, isn’t he handsome as hell? Can we keep him, pleaseeeee.”
“I’d love to darling, but you know Gran is Orinthophobic, don’t you!”
“Orintho…what?”
“She has a fear of birds.”
“But Mamma, he can stay upstairs in my room”
“First things first my girl; let’s help restore this little guy,” said the DH.
“Oh so you mean we can keep him, Dad? Gee thanks!”
“My lips are sealed, hun,” he said, looking at me with that cheesy grin.
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Here’s another edition of Friday Fictioneers, hosted by the lovely Rochelle Wisoff – Fields. Picture credit Douglas M. MacIlroy.
Find some fabulous entries to this weeks Friday Fictioneers here.
I am participating in The Write Tribe Problogger October 2017 Blogging Challenge. Today’s theme is Bated Breath.
51 thoughts on “The Unannounced Guest: #WriteTribeProblogger #WriteBravely #FridayFictioneers”
very cute story 🙂
Thank you
Whyis it fathers who always find a way to break the rules? Very sweet story, Natasha. You sure have way with words.
Oh thanks so very much Shinjini ❤️
If only I could count all times I have heard that “pleaseeeee”. And it doesn’t help that all the injured animals in the world land up on my door step. I don’t know how I manage to say no .
I know the feeling. It’s my husband who mostly says the no, usually. LOL! Btw tried commenting on your story, but no luck with Disqus. So here’s my comment:
Shocking twist to the tale. But I guess there are many who have to go through this cruel fate of destiny. Nicely done Sunita.
Fathers always find a way to break the rules Nice post!
Oh yes, they do! Thanks Ryan for reading:)
Guess he doesn’t like his mother in law much?
Maybe he does. He’s just an animal lover. 🙂
Keeping a pet and not keeping it always has the family in divide! That was a cosy tale!
Have you read Mute Witness by me?
Going to read your tale Anagha. Im glad you enjoyed my tiny tale. Thank you. 🙂
Doesn’t this happen in most households? There has to be at least one family member who has some problem with keeping a pet. Poor kid, I hope he/she gets to keep it.
Oh yes! True that Vinodini. I suppose she will get to keep Mr. Mynah. Gran may just manage to come around.
wow I loved the dialogues and I am glad you kept the bird
Ha ha! Thanks Aks <3
Cute story, Natasha. Poor Gran! Facts or Fiction? #4 in ProBlogger Challenge
Dear Natasha,
Perhaps this will help Gran get past her phobia. Cute dialogue.
Shalom,
Rochelle
That’s the idea Rochelle. Glad you liked it. Gracias:)
The little girl knows how to twist dad round her little finger, and you showed that well. Nice little sitcom.
Thank you so much Penny. 🙂
Great story full of love. That bird is so cute. We too had many pets at our home during my childhood days.
Sounds like fun Vasantha. Do share those tales sometime. Thank you for reading and commenting. 🙂
Aww.. Such a sweet tale. Live it, Natasha.
Thank you dear Shalini 🙂 <3
Such a sweet story, Natasha. This can very well happen in my home too. 🙂
Oh yes, in all our homes I bet! Thank you Esha:)
Get Gran some therapy, then they’ll live happily together. A really tweet tale!
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Thanks a lot Keith. 🙂
lucky bird 🙂
short story with many a nuance at play.
Thanks Ish <3
Wretched cell phones!
An upbeat, well written story and I like the mgood intentions on the child’s part but I hope they realize they can’t imprison a wild thing or it will die.
Cute and well written story and good intentions on the child’s part, but I hope they realize they can’t imprison a wild thing or it will die.
Hello Christine:)
Actually they will probably help revive it back to good health. But I also do know what you are saying. I’ve resuced birds in the past with my little girl, but none of them survived. So yeah the possibility of going in that direction always remains. Unfortunately 🙁
Fathers can be like that…at least, my ex-wife thought so!
Mine: https://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2017/10/12/birds-of-a-feather-flock-me/
Scott
Oh Yes, Scott. Fathers can be adorable. Thank you for swinging by. 🙂
That’s a feel-good story there, Natasha. Not sure if gran would agree though.
Lol! Maybe yes, maybe not 🙂
Gran’s got issues! Well done!
Thanks Miles. 🙂
Quite the language coming out of a 9-year-old 😉
I wouldn’t be happy if I were Gran.
Ha!Ha! You said it Dale.
I know poor Gran, but maybe this will help get over her phobia. Who knows she may fall in love with Mr. Mynah.
Poor granny. Really cute story, but poor, poor Granny 🙂
Thank you Linda 🙂
Gran is not going to be happy if she finds out!
Yeah, I guess so, but who knows she will come around. Thanks Iain. 🙂
That is a very cute story..I remember bringing a puppy secretly once into our ancestral home in a similar manner..loved it.
Haven’t we all done that! I bought a puppy too that too when my older girl was 6 or so. We hid it in my room and it started whimpering and wailing middle of the night. My parents got really upset and turned the poor thing out. Sigh! 🙁
Nice story, Natasha.
Loved the dialogue. And, the camaraderie between dad and son .
Thanks dear Moon.:) <3 I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Hugs