Loveless: #FridayFictioneers
It’s yet another dark, dreary morning. I wonder why the nights aren’t endless. Then the sinister mornings wouldn’t return. These gloomy mornings remind me of my vulnerabilities, and give me no choice but to face this loveless world squarely; everyday.
Oh! It’s almost 7:30 A.M. and I’m late for work again. No time for breakfast, but I’ll throw in a quick sandwich.
I pull out two slices and I lay them on the board. A pair of bright eyes and a wide, smiling mouth stare back at me. Oh wait! Is it a heart?
Well, that’s a sign. Maybe, there’s hope…
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Here’s another edition of Friday Fictioneers, hosted by the lovely Rochelle Wisoff – Fields. Much thanks to Kelvin M. Knight for this week’s prompt.
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44 thoughts on “Loveless: #FridayFictioneers”
Very nicely written. Love the endless night and the sinister morning part. 🙂
I love finding such signs. No matter how the day is, I’ll try to look for positivity through these antics. 🙂
Loved it ! Hope lingers on forever!!
I am a big believer of such signs. This was a good post.
Dear Natasha,
So her life isn’t as loveless as she thought. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Lovely story. There are plenty of positive signs, we just need to find them and believe on them
This a short n sweet post.. Liked reading it… Thanks for sharing this Natasha
hahaha this one is soo ccute!! yes, there is hope nd yes that is a sign!
A nicely written fiction story, Natasha. but I do wonder that isn’t such thing happen with a majority of us on a Monday morning?
Small things can lighten up your day, bring in positivity.
There is and will always be hope. Every morning brings in a new beginning, a new ray of hope. 🙂
Ah! Hope. It’s what we always look for, isn’t it? Anywhere we can find it – even in the shapes made my the holes in a slice of bread. Lovely story!
That’s the spirit, Natasha. When we are positive in attitude we get to see positive things around. A ray of hope is enough to keep the day going.
I loved it as it has a positive ending. Life with hope is the best and gives us something to look forward to.
Yes, Natasha! Even in the darkest of times, there is hope! What a beautiful take on the prompt. So loved it!
Hey Natasha! Loved the way you wrote this one. It felt like a diary…felt sad for the protagonist at the start but so glad it ended on a hopeful and optimistic note. Keep writing! Cheers!
Beautiful piece Natz.. Hope I like Hope & signs of hope 🙂
Nice take on the prompt.
Loved reading it.
It is good to observe things around
Sometimes they makes us smile
There is hope always!!
Hope is such a powerful thing. And yep, looks like a heart.
A lovely hope filled take on this… (P.S. I went the other way with the same prompt 😀 )
That truly is a hearty breakfast! I can so relate to the sentiments of your opening line.
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New morning new dreams and full of positive energy so much is there those few words amazing read
A toast with a heart would uplift my spirits too!
Loved your take on the ‘hearty bread’.. short, sweet and so much meaning
A short one but with such a deep meaning. Loved it 🙂
That’s hope for sure 🙂
Loved your take on this photo prompt. There is always hope its just we fail to see sometimes.
How simple yet poignant
Loved it
P.
Yes, hope is always there!!! It helps us to live our life to the fullest!!! Nice story!!
The beacon of hope shines bright- so glad she found her silver lining.
You conjure up a picture of someone struggling with depression. It’s encouraging that she was able to interpret the hole in the bread in a positive way, as it shows she has the potential to see the good and the hopeful, which gives her a chance of healing.
Nice word painting.
Always hope. Lovely story.
I have absolutely been loving this Friday Fiction photo prompts!
As opposed to the sunshine value of things, it’s refreshing to read a tale featuring someone who finds hope in the dark!
Maybe it gives her heart to face the day now… Yes.
Sometimes we are so aimless that we don’t feel ab urge to face morning to repeat the same process of life.
But as they say there’s always s morning to every night and always happy moments with sad ones . So look forward to glorious and sunshine mornings 🙂
Yeah I hope the sign portends a glorious life for her. Let’s wish her well.
Great story, Natasha . Love, even its sign , does make us think hope. I wish her well. With hope , may she look forward to glorious mornings.
Yes, let’s hope so too Moon. Thank you for reading❤️
My pleasure, dear❤️❤️❤️
Well done with the prompt, Natasha. I love the signs of hope amidst all the things that can go wrong on a given day.
Yes Esha after all hope is the beginning you see… a beginning to a better life
I like the idea of preferring the endless night rather than the mornings, usually it would be the other way round. Nice touch.
I’m so glad you noticed that Iain. That was the whole idea behind the story. Her preference for the darkness and plunging herself in all things dark and not seeing any hope whatsoever, at all.
Hopefully there seems to be a streak of hope shining in her life now.