A Night of Nostalgic Nebula: #WriteTribeProblogger #WriteBravely #FridayFictioneers
Saturday, 5:46 A.M.: I haven’t slept a wink. The receding moon is gaping at me blankly.
Well, it was a decadent night of drinking and dancing, on the River Mandovi.
A night that also brought back memories from the yesteryears: of Rahul and I. When we had chatted on the same deck; till the wee hours of the morning, trying to drown our attraction in pints of beer. But, with no success.
Last night Rahul arrived with a vixen wrapped around his arms. We had exchanged awkward glances, but he seemed too much into her.
Sigh! Some things are never meant to be.
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Here’s another edition of Friday Fictioneers, hosted by the lovely Rochelle Wisoff – Fields. Much thanks to Ted Strutz for this week’s prompt.
Find some fabulous entries to this weeks Friday Fictioneers here.
I am participating in The Write Tribe Problogger October 2017 Blogging Challenge. Today’s theme is Nostalgic.
36 thoughts on “A Night of Nostalgic Nebula: #WriteTribeProblogger #WriteBravely #FridayFictioneers”
Few lines say a lot. I am happy she made a peace with it, anyways I don’t like guys with the name Rahul… 😛
Ha ha! Usually Rahul’s are sauve and sweet. This one was slick and slimy!
Its painful but I am sure we are deemed for much better
Happy that she came to know this earlier. It’s better now than never.
Sigh for what was never meant to be,and smile for what is yet to be. Coz the future is definitely going to be better that what did not last.
Oh yes, such beautiful words Sunita. Thank you. Hope is the beginning isn’t it
Rahul seems a bit fickle. Better he be left behind 🙂
Oh yes Linda. Thank you for reading and leaving your imprints.
At least she’s made peace with that! Smart girl!
Yes, with a bit of heartache, but then well in time.
She deserved better. Beautifully written.. Loved it
Thank you Swati
If something is meant to be, it will be. If it’s not, it’s moved aside for something else that IS.
Oh yes, those words are just bang on Holly. Thank you.
Yes, some things are not meant to be! Good she realized this early on …
Yes, the universe has a way of telling you right from wrong
I didn’t quite expect that twist at the end! But it’s true, some things are just not meant to be!
Yes and for the better
That no-good Rahul. I doubt that the vixen will be loyal to him and then, he will be alone and lonely, but it’s a fate that he will deserve.
Oh yes, karna is a bitch Thank you Alice for reading and commenting.
quite a twist at the end… Loved it 🙂
Thank you Raj❤️
Good that it happened earlier in life than late… cant imagine plight if she had discovered this ugly truth that night!
Interesting take Natasha
– Anagha from Team MocktailMommies
Thank you dear Anagha appreciate you stopping by and leaving your lovely imprints. ❤️
These shorts talk of so many unspoken words. Very nice!
Thank you Priyadarshini
He so doesn’t deserve her ‘sigh’! Though I know it can take a while to get over love, when one is intensely affected. I hope she finds the man of her dreams at the end of it all.
Beautifully written, Natasha. Loved the story.❤️
Well, it’s not like he’s the last man on earth 😛 I would say, don’t waste your time girl.
Not nice at all. But then perhaps, she’s well rid of Rahul.
Oh man, thats a rude awakening 🙁
Ah! That’s a sad tale. But for once, I would love to indulge in a glass of drink and dance on the deck.
Always a horrible feeling when that happens. There’ll be someone else for her out there…
That’s life, we’ve all been there. Hopefully she finds someone new soon and forgets him.
That was quite a twist in the tale- damn Rahul he is not worth her love
Rightly so! Thanks Aks for being the first reader to this story of mine. 🙂