A Night to Remember: #FridayFictioneers
The night was ripe. Smoke freely mingled with teen spirit.
“Let’s drive to the terraces, and watch the sunrise,” suggested Tony.
“Who the heck wants to watch sunrises, when we can spend the night grabbing a few more beers!” retorted Liz.
“Liz don’t be a spoilt sport,” grimaced Marissa.
“Come Marissa, we’ll go,” said Tony.
Tony revved up the engine.
This was his golden opportunity to impress Marissa. It was mostly falling apart with Liz.
The car flew into space, suspended in time; against Mr. Randy’s porch.
“Love the unknown,” someone whispered.
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Back to Friday Fictioneers, after 7 months! How much I have missed writing fiction and being part of this prompt hosted by the lovely Rochelle Wisoff – Fields. Much thanks to Liz Young for this week’s photo prompt.
Find some fabulous entries to this weeks Friday Fictioneers here.
32 thoughts on “A Night to Remember: #FridayFictioneers”
Hey Natasha, this is my first time on your blog and I love all your posts. Keep posting!
Hey Natasha, this is my first time on your blog and I love all your stories. Keep posting!
Thanks a big bunch, Mark. So happy to hear that. Glad you came swinging by.
Natasha recently posted…The Road Trip: #FridayFictioneers
Now this is something I expect to see in the movies, not real life! I hope everyone got out okay with just some scratches or something. OUCH! Sometimes men can really act like children wanting to show off! SHEESH! Well, there ya go just another flight to ??? and OUCHES!!! Hope you’re doing well my friend. Take care because I care!
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Yes, doing well darling Marie. People will be people, what to do.
Big hugs. xoxo
Yes, alls well that ends well. I was hoping to add some humour but the universe guiding me to write this had other plans. 😉
Hugs Marie.
Natasha,
As Dirty Harry said, “A man’s gotta know his limitations.” I’m sure that’s what this young fella learned from this unpleasant experience. Great write-up! Feel free to add your link to my WildWednesdays “where just about anything goes” linky party! Have a funtastic week, my dear!
Sure will do, sweety.
You have a fab week ahead. Hugs hugs. <3
Oh so true! I hope no one was seriously injured, but do hope they were all shaken to their senses.
Kenneth C Schneider recently posted…Crops & Clips: Flashback to June, 2018
Fortunately no one was. 🙂 I had planned to make this witty, but there was a sudden twist in the tale. Will reserve the wit for another day.
Thanks for reading, Ken.
Not exactly the ending I was expecting! Great to see you back here again Natasha.
Btw, nice to see Froggie hopped over to your place! For a link, when you add it to the post you click the paperclip symbol and insert the URL just as you do when applying it to a word.
Keith’s Ramblings recently posted…Ninety nine words …
Yes, feels good to churn out fiction. I have been meaning to, since February/March.
What I love about #FF is that it’s short, crisp and barely takes any time to put together.
Will do so next time with Froggy, Thanks, Keith.
Fun story that made me wince and grin at the end. Yeah, I don’t think this will help him get the girl.
Ha! Ha! yes, Anne. I’m glad you enjoyed it. So glad you stopped by. Arigato. 🙂
Welcome back! Good story about teenage ways.
Ronda
Thank you Ronda. Happy to know you enjoyed my attempt after a long drawn sabbatical.
Thanks for swinging by. 🙂
I hope they are all ok. This should have both of the women walking in the opposite direction from this dip.
MS, yes, all’s well. When i started writing this piece I had humour in mind, but it took a twisted turn, leaving some for our imagination. 🙂
Dear Natasha,
I think I understand why Liz was done with Tony. Perhaps she had tired of his antics. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Dear Rochelle,
Wonder what she had in mind, or Tony for that matter.
When I started writing this I had humour in mind. Little did I know there would be a twist in time and tale.
In my head they crashed into that wall, leaving a not so appealing mural in Mr. Randy’s home. And they did come out of it alive. 🙂
Love and light.
Well done. 🙂
Ellen, I’m glad you enjoyed this.
Mr Randy will definitely have an out of the world reaction for this ‘mural’ art!
Anagha Yatin recently posted…Painless Sunburns
Ha ha! Love that
Oh no, that certainly is a night to remember. Marissa does seem to have a sense of humour though. Maybe not all is lost for Tony.
You said it Gah. ☺️
Guys will do some stupid stuff to impress women. We won’t get into my follies. They’re funnier when they’re someone else’s.
Totally so, Nobbin.
The things guys do to impress the girls…
wouldn’t have worked with me!
Yeah, totally to each their own. It’s been a while Dale, and I loved seeing you here.
oh, the exuberance of youth and sometimes fatal consequences as a result. 🙂
plaridel recently posted…Love Story
Yes, that’s the thing. When I started writing this story I had a dash of humour in mind, but the words took their own course.
If you look closely there probably still is.